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Nell and The Afterdark
INTERLUDE: The [GROUP NAME OMITTED] Mercenaries
OR: The People Seer Hired to Kidnap The Fixer

TEAM GLASS (Action & Combat)
"Red": History vague. Behavior indicates some kind of military training. Prefers to solve problems quickly and with firepower. Under watch from management for past breaches of conduct and other more serious (but unprovable) transgressions including mistreatment of prisoners. Was killed by The Afterdark.
Joseph: The only redeemable person. Born in Nairobi, Kenya, immigrated to US of A as a small child. Majored in mechanical engineering at MIT. A good guy; it is unknown how he ended up working with [GROUP NAME OMITTED]. Was killed by The Afterdark.
[SIX OTHER MERCS OMITTED]

TEAM SAND (Support & Research)
Doug: Has some medical training, but more along the lines of an emergency response team than that of a nurse or medical doctor. Is missing his left ear and has prison tattoos across chest.
Kara: Only female on the force. Weapons expert. Romantically involved on-and-off with Joseph.
[SIX OTHER MERCS OMITTED]

MANAGEMENT:
Walker: Leader, mostly stays with Team Sand off to the side but sometimes works with Team Glass on tough jobs. The handle "Walker" might be a first or last name, and could also be a pseudonym. Walker gets the job done, often to the annoyance of his employer.

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