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She looked at the clock and back at Derek. "That was fast."
"I've got lots of practice," he said with a shrug. "Get over here."
The girl got up obediently and shuffled to the table. The Afterdark was laying out folders. She said, "Are these all for Seer?"
"They might or might not be. He's not the only person with powers relating to making people believe things that aren't real. You and me have to go through the folders and figure out which ones are Seer's and which aren't."
"Fun."
"Shut up," Derek said. By now he'd removed his gloves and mask. He took a folder and opened it.

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