snippet from October Qualifications
October Qualifications
Random Pony Story Part Two
Harry returned, five minutes later, with Gandalf, who is a wizard, Bilbo, who is a hobbit, and some dwarves. "I found a map." he said, panting. "It shows where some think Dumbledore's ghost may be. Dumbledore can help you get back to your dimension." They all started a very long journey to the place. It was through mountain, forests, valleys, and lakes, and when they were almost there, Harry stopped. "Wait," he said. "Dumbledore doesn't have a ghost!" Everybody groaned in frustration. "But how are we supposed to get back home now?" said one of the ponies. "Don't worry, I can get you back." said Gandalf. "You ought to have remembered this before." said one of the dwarves. "Then, we wouldn't have had to go on this long journey." "I'm sorry, I couldn't sleep last night because I had a bad dream about ponies tormenting me. I can't think properly without sleep." said Harry. Some of the ponies scowled at Harry. "Oh, I had a bad dream about clowns tormenting me." replied Gandalf. Of course, everyone looked at him like he was crazy as he started his spell to help the ponies go home. There was a flash of light, and the ponies were back in their world, where they belonged.
After that, Aaishah and Maryam(This is purely fiction, and doesn't relate to any real people.) came to Pony Land out of nowhere. Maryam was playing a Magic Sparkle Heart game with the ponies, while Aaishah was reading a very interesting book. They both had a lot of fun, and they went home in a shuttle bus, which they loved. Finally, they got in their beds and fell asleep. The End."
"So, did you like the story?" I asked my sister. "NO," she replied. "Next time don't put Harry Potter in a My Little Pony story."

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