snippet from Snow
Snow
My jaw clenched. She was right but not the way she was thinking. I wanted to know badly why she wanted me to go in with her. I know that I could touch her mind and find out. She looked down and started messing with a strand of hair. Her scent was filling my nose and I knew it was not a good idea. Her eyes looked back in my eyes. "You don't have to." She turned around and walked into the building. I could hear her light footsteps going down the stairs. I walked through the door hitting the wall as hard as I could on my way out.

I was by her side in a matter of seconds. she didn't notice me until she stumbled and I caught her. She looked back at me and gave me a smile. I immediatly let go of her waist. She turned back and stawberries filled my senses. I stayed close to her as she pushed through the door. Soon the scent of strawberries was lost. The hallway was empty, but that didn't help the smell.
Anastia
He followed me down the hall. I looked back every few steps just to make sure he was there. I couldn't hear him make any noise. He looked really uncomfortable. His eyes were black and his jaw stayed clenched. His face was never the less flawless. He ran his hand through his jet black hair. A few strands fell back into his face, but made him only look more mysterious. We reached my hospital door. "Thankyou. You really didn't have to do that." He nodded his head. "Will you come back tommorow?" He looked back into my eyes. "Yes." He spoke harshly through his teeth. His eyes wondered around but always landed back to me. His eyebrows furrowed and his hands clenched.
I guess he really doesn't like hospitals. I reached up and put my hand against his cheek. His hand grasped my wrist and pulled it away. "I'll see you tommorow." He spoke alittle gentler. "Leave me a note if you aren't going to be there." I gave him a strange look. Why wouldn't I be there. The door to my room opened. "Oh, good your back. Mrs. Kelim is on her way." I looked back and saw Malcolm leaving. I nodded my head and went in. "Here through this on and hurry!" The gown came flying to my face. I stripped my shirt and the jacket off not caring about Maria being there. I kicked off my shoes and through the robe over my chest. I slid under the blankets while the door flung open. "Hello Anastia. You look a lot better." Mrs. Kelim walked over to me and stroked a strand of hair. My heartbeat began to slow.

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