snippet from Olivia's Fairytale
Olivia's Fairytale
OLIVIA: Okay good! I have some REALLY big news! So, you know how we’ve been writing stories in class? Well, they said if we wanted we could enter them in a story contest! Each grade picked a winner. So I wrote mine and it was about this prince and he gets saved by a princess, cuz I knew everyone was going to be writing them the other way around and I wanted to stand out. And everyone in my class who read it said it was REALLY funny so, guess who won?!

LILY: Hmm, was it Sarah?

OLIVIA: No...

LILY: Eric?

OLIVIA: No!

LILY: What about...

OLIVA: NO IT WAS ME!!! I won!!!

LILY: Oh, of course! I should’ve known! I’m so proud of you! You must be an outstanding writer.

OLIVIA: Yeah I am! And there’s an award assembly tomorrow at school and all the parents are going to be there, and I’m gonna get a certificate...

LILY: Heather, did you hear--

HEATHER: Yeah, it’s really hard NOT to.

LILY: She won a contest--

HEATHER: (still cooking) I can’t go.

OLIVIA: ...That’s okay...You wanna read it? My story?

HEATHER: Later.

LILY: (to herself, but loud enough for Heather to notice) Bet George would’ve gone... (Heather glares at her, Lily doesn’t notice)

OLIVIA: What about Dad?

LILY: Nothing. I was just...it doesn’t matter, forget it. (Olivia looks confused and curious, but shakes it off)

OLIVIA: Well, you’ll go right?

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