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Screenplay
4. EXT. OUTER SUBURBS NEAR HERMAN’S HOUSE - FLANAGAN’S CAR -
EARLY MORNING
Flanagan is leaning against the outside of his car watching the sunrise and drinking coffee from his thermos. He looks tired from no sleep. He seems to be enjoying himself when Herman’s door flies open and Herman runs towards the car screaming.

JOSEPH FLANAGAN
What’s wrong? What happened?

MIKEY HERMAN
HE WAS THERE! EVERYWHERE! IN MY
HOUSE! I can’t do this. I can’t do
this anymore. You have to get me
out of here. Please.

JOSEPH FLANAGAN
What happened? You’re not making
any sense. Calm down and start from
the beginning.
MIKEY HERMAN
It’s everywhere. There was painting
on the wall, Postcards everywhere,
he’s left me my final message. He
was in my house. While I was
sleeping. Didn’t you see him? Isn’t
this what I hired you for?

JOSEPH FLANAGAN
I watched all night. I only.. I
fell asleep for a second. I’m
sorry. WAIT. I have the footage of
all the entrances right here.

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