snippet from Rebirth: Chi Oni
Rebirth: Chi Oni
The moon was at it's fullest peck. It look so beautiful as it lit up the night sky, but people didn't seem to notice or care. They were to busy going places, getting thing, huslting people out of their money.To think that they had something so beautiful and perious as the moon and yet disregard it as if it was nothing was wretched. But one person could see the beauty and power the moon possessed.
She was a young girl name Ryan,she had jet black hair and viprent blue eys. She sat on the fire escape rail of her building. Looking at the moon she wounder if it ever got lonely. To be surround by so many and yet be so far. It was sad to know that she would forever have to spend an eternity alone. Watching others find their happiness, well she and none. Ryan at times felt like the moon, so alone, empty, isloated from the world. But it was Ok since they had each other and that was all they needed.
As she sat on the railing, shivering from the cold. Ryan felt this connection and raise her hand to the sky as if she was really touching the moon, and for that one moment she felt at peace. But as quickly as it came it was gone, broken by a slaming of a door. Ryan jump off the rail and fly into her room and slam her body into her door just as it was about to be open. She stuggle to keep the door close and at one point thought she wouldn't be able to. The Man on the other side would come in and take his sweet time reconstructing Ryan's body. Luckly Ryan was able to keep the door close long enough to lock it.
Even though one lock was enough to keep the man out Ryan bolted the door with three more locks to give her some peace of mind. When the man realized that he wouldn't be getting in he started yelling at her though the door "You better come out now you bitch! The longer you make me wait the more time I'm going to use to punish you". He kept banging on the door, making threats, and calling her names. At that time Ryan's mom came home and all of his angry and agravation sifted towards her.
"Paul are you crazy? Your going to make the naigbors call the cops on us again."
"Shut the fuck up. This is my house and I'll do whatever I damn well please." there was te sound of the refergater being open then slam shut. Ryan knew that Paul was looking for something to drink and knowing there was none he was going to be pissed. "Fuck!!" She heard him yell.
"Stop yelling you idoit. I didn't come home early to listen to you yell" Ryan's moom complained.
"Yeah cuz lying on your back is so hard" Paul said sarcastically. There was a sound of glass sattering "Jeus crist women! Are you crazy!?"
"Fuck you Paul. I'm a dancer not some fucking whore!" she scream.
"Oh I'm sorry I didn't know that there was a differents between being a stripper and a whore."

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