snippet from Rebirth: Chi Oni
Rebirth: Chi Oni
George and Ryan circle each other, one trying to find the other weak spot, while the other was waiting for the other to make the first move. Suddenly George stop completely and drop his arms, big mistake. "Look to make this fight fair, I'm going to let you have a free hit" he said tapping his face, George's biggiest mistake.
Ryan sent a hard jab hitting George's face effectly disorienting him before she sent a series of punches and jads to his abdominaland face. Ryan threw a low kick to his leg making him fall to his knees. While he was down Ryan back off allowing George time to collect himself. George got up with a 'WTF' look on his face. George then threw wild punchs and kick Ryan block and dodge with ease while attacking every opening George left for her.
After awhile George got so angry at being hit and not land a single hit on her, he lost it. There was a bloosming pain on Ryans face as she hit the ground, George had just did an illegl head kick that could of done some serious damage. But that wasn't the end of George's redemption. As Ryan was down he grab her and put her in a head lock trying to make her tap out.
But George didn't know that his actions caused Ryan to go into a state of panic and all she could think of was to survive. SO when Ryan felt these arms snake around her neck she didn't even think twice as she throw her head back breaking George's nose. George garb his nose in pain, feeling the blood gust out dripping onto his hands, but that wasn't the end of his pain. Ryan shot up off the ground and did a spin kick smacking George onto the mat. Unlike last time Ryan pounce onto him attacking him like no tomorrow.
A pair of muscule arms wrap them selfs around Ryans little form and lifted her off of George "She broke my nose" George cried.
With Ryans thrashing arms pin underneath his Max grunted "You should be glad thats all that she broke". A hard elbow to his kidny made Max groan in pain "Can I get some help over here" he called out seeing a couple of fighters entering the gym. They rush over grabbing George and taking him to the locker room to get clean up leaving Max to deal with a voilent Ryan.
Max rock her back and forth "Shh shh Ry. It's ok, he's gone now. Nobodys going to hurt you, not while I'm around" he whisper feeling Ryan relax in his arms "Thats it, good girl. Just relax I got you." When he felt that Ryan was back in control he let her go. Ryan turn to Max and saw his eye's change to a dark color, on Ryan's face a sick blueish bruise forming on her jaw and making its way up to the side of her face. He wish that he didn't save George from Ryan's wrath.
There was no words that could discribe the angry that Max felt, he knew that George didn't have the most control in the ring but he didn't think he would lose it like this. Max want to so badly go into the other room and beat the hell out of George. But Ryan need to be taken care of first. Swallowing his angry, Max took Ryan into his office and handed her an ice pack.

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