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Adventure World
she's super cute, honestly although we'd only been dating for a few short months, I felt really close to her. She anchored me when the world felt like a giant tidal wave crashing down on me. I honestly don't know what I would do without her, she's far too amazing for me. Don't get me wrong though, the girl's nuts about me. Especially my writing, see I'm a bit of a writer, even got this story I've been working on. It's about this guy who is this bad ass knight of Semaria...yes, I know that's in India! Look, it isn't easy to come up with names ok? Anyway I looked on my phone and I had a message, she wanted me to come and hang out on the hidden hills. The hidden hills are where we met as children. "you're late" I can still hear her lil voice demand explanation of me, then she did something that took me by surprise, she took my hand. "I want to show you something" her voice still sends my heart into a craze that I just can't control. We walked to the hills and laid on top of them, gazing up into the now night sky "see those two stars?" she pointed to two unusually bright stars, blinking and shimmering in the sky. A sky you couldn't see back in town. "those two stars are us, shining brightly in the night sky, both would be alone....but they found each other and will always have each other, just like us." I remember that that night, as the fireflies flew around illuminating her face in the dark, was truly the first time I realized just how beautiful she was. Which is why I did something I never thought I would in a million years...I kissed her. Anyway, to get back where I was, She wanted to meet in that spot tonight, I gathered up my coat and headed off, it was a rather misty, kinda spooky evening, not that I was scared or anything. SNAP! "what was that?!" I said, ok I admit I was a little scared. Something about this place, not just tonight, but since the first night I came here, I've always been uneasy here. "Say good lookin, headin my way?" All of a sudden that uneasy feeling was washed away, as it always was with her, and then, she ran into my arms. As big as I talk, just being with her made me feel small, she was too good for me, way too good. We sat there for hours, just holding her in my arms, actually feeling like something less than a complete failure, at least until the rain stared."damn, that's right, the news said it was supposed to rain tonight, em I'm SOOO sorry, I forgot and-" but to my surprise she simply kissed me, took my hand, and said while looking right into my eyes "Wait, lets stay. I eel like the rain can wash away any burden on my soul, no matter how heavy...do you believe in my rain?" without skipping a beat I brushed back her now soaked hair and whispered "yes, always" and held her to

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