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Frost tainted my breath as I sat in the damp foliage of the forest floor. My tears have long since been frozen to my face, and I imagine my hair is a complete mess. It's morning now, barely. There is a dim light filtering through the needles of the pine trees, slightly allowing me to see my surroundings. I had no idea where I was when I got here. All I know is that I'm no longer with my sister. Dead or not, she's not with me now, when I need her most.

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