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That was it. Sam turned and stalked away from her towards the bar, and she was torn between running after him or turning around and choking Trip.

She whirled on the drunken ass standing behind her, and he took a step back. "What the hell was that,” she couldn’t even yell, the crowd that was drawing around them beginning to disperse.


"characters are most fascinating when made to choose between two undesirable options."

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