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Eye
Just. Fucking. Inn-keepers.

"Wake up." I mutter, sliding down the marble wall until I could feel the floor with the palms of my hands.

No luck.

"Come on, Flynn." I close my eyes. "You've seen all of this already, so wake up."

I can still feel the cold.

"Nothing ne-"

I am interrupted by a voice that I hadn't heard.

For a long time.

"Gene." Her voice is as cold as the rest of the room.

I look up without hesitance to see her undead, almost angelic body before me.

"Gene, why'd you let her do this to you?" I noticed that only her right eye was open.

I don't bother to answer.

"Have you forgotten what they did to me?" She asks. "Have you forgotten what they did-" Blood begins to drip down her cheek from the closed eye. "to my eye?"

Blood begins to gush from the seam. I see her pick a knife from the haze. I want to scream. I want rip the knife from her young hands. I am paralyzed. I cannot speak, only watch as she digs the knife into the socket.

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