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The red light started to glow out of control, embracing the two girls. It was bright and almost scary. The light grew larger and larger, eventually sucking the girls into the book. Another dimension flew through the girls's eyes as the light guided them to someplace else. The light blinded them once again and Mimi was almost sick of it. Finally, the girls fell to the ground, rudely, and opened their eyes. It was vacant, filled with land and never-ending sky. Nickoy shook her head. "Are we dreaming?" Mimi asked, taking a look around. Nickoy had then saw people approaching and tried to wave them over. "Hey! We need help! Please!" she screamed, waving her arms frantically. A few men made their way over. Nickoy was so happy to see another human besides Mimi and herself. "Excuse me, could you tell us where we are? My friend and I have no idea-" one of the men grabbed Nickoy's arm, holding it tight in his beefy grasp. The other men chuckled. "Look at this foreign clothing," said one. Mimi tried to inch away, tried to get somebody else to help them but another grabbed her, too. She tried kicking and screaming but nothing worked. "Lets take them home to the boss." "Or we could use them for ourselves." "Good idea!" Mimi tried to scream as loud as she could. Suddenly, a voice came into the picture. "It isn't nice to take advantage of girls." The men with Nickoy and Mimi all turned around. A young man with vibrant blue hair and a glowing character on his forehead-ogre-stood before them. The girls smiled in relief, hoping he'd be their savior for the day. The man rolled punches and pulled amazing moves on the men, as some ran away from the scene and others were injured. It was quiet for a moment after the man had attacked as Mimi's face beamed. "Okay...well..I'm leaving!" waved the young man, walking away. "WHAT?! You aren't going to help us or anything?" Mimi screeched, holding on to his ankle. He shook her off. "Not unless you guys pay me." Mimi had a blank face. "We don't have any money!" the young man paused. "Well, have fun on your own!" and he walked away. Mimi huffed. How rude was he, leaving two young girls in some random spot where they could have been brutually raped or killed. Nickoy just laughed at Mimi. Mimi took a seat by her. "What will we do now?" Nickoy asked, blankly looking at her hands. The moment was silent for a second. Strangely, the red light came back and surrounded Nickoy. "W-What's happening? Mimi, help!" Mimi tried to grab at Nickoy, but the light made her dissappear. "Nickoy...Nickoy! NICKOY! Please come back!" Mimi sobbed. Where could she have gone off to? Mimi didn't know.

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