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Chaos
I'm spinning out of control. I can actually feel the car turning over and over. The last thing that i saw before the wreck was that same creepy guy in the distance. Why me? Couldn't he have picked a different person to be in his cultist group? Just when my life seems to go normal he turns up and ruins everything that i have built up. Usually it isn't as big a scene as it is this time, but it is still enough for me to have to move multiple times if it got worse enough. One time I walked up to him and told him to get lost and leave me alone or was going to call the cops but all he did was smile and tell me that i will understand soon enough.
*************************************************************************************I wake up in a hospital with not my mom by my side but with some strange person that I have never seen before in my life. I start to sit up but the person just jumps up and pushes me back down.
"Stay down," was all that she said to me. I don't think so! I think to myself. I don't take orders from anyone except my parents and me. Especially not from a person who i have no idea who they are.
"Um I don't think so. I dont even know who you are!" I say to the women who looks only a year or two older than my 17 year old self."Where is my mother? I need to see her. Was she hurt in the crash? Where is she?"
"I'm sorry but I am not aloud to answer that question" She said back to me.
"What ever" I say back to her, "but then I need to speak to who ever can answer that question right now."
"He told me that you would say that" she said with a knowing smile on her face. "Oh there he is right now." She point to a person that was faced away from me. He opened my door and then faced me. Crap!
"Hello, my dear. Glad to see me yet?" the creepy man said to me. I looked over to the girl who was sitting next to my bed. She was now standing up looking alert. I could tell that who ever this man was, he had some power.
I want to scream. I actually think that I let out a little moan but I really wanted to scream. The creepy man starts laughing.
"Where's my mom you creep?" I say to him with a discusted tone to show him that I was in no mood to play his stupid games.
"Is that anyway to talk to your superior?" the woman next to me said? She looked like I should be slapped in the face for speaking out.

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