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"dont you wish your girlfriend was hot like me ..dont you wish your girlfriend was a freak like me"...

Hate that ringtone...why, why i havent change it!and who the hell is this number from, Hello...."hi its me...i...i just want to tell you that im sorry for the way that everything went between us" ...really? you are sorry..sorry for telling me that im an unhappy little nerd that only ....you know what Hanna, just forget it, you are right Im not the guy for you just Forget it!... "but you need to understand i need more from you, you are a grown man we are not kids anymore you need to grow up and start" and i hung up, i shouldnt have...you know, i should get a cable that connects my brain, my heart and my mouth...that would be usefull, Why didnt i told her that i was sorry that i was going to change that i wont play so much X-box and will stop reading comic books..Wait....what? stop playing x-box? stop reading comic books? Why doesnt she stops buying prada shoes or kisses and hugs bags...you know the XOXO kisses and hugs,why! why did she called me and why did i said what i said, gosh im such a dumbass.
im hungry, looked for some pizza on the fridge look at the clock almost 5, called my mother to see how my sister was, no one answer...maybe she felt better and they are at the mall.
Turn the TV on and great just what i need it is broken, or maybe it was the cable? ,there was only snow on the screen this is really turning out to be a bad day,called the cable company but no one answer...i bet im not the only one calling! can you imagine that, no food, in bed and withouth being able to watch family guy! God...this is crazy, Going Out.

Im driving trhough the city trying to find something to eat but everything is closed, what the hell...i just remembered they said on TV to stay in cause of theflu virus mutation of some sort, im a genious! not only did i place myself at risk of getting the flu but also no one will serve me food cause they are closed.
Lets get back home, no one was outside driving like a moron so i was happy to have the streets for myself turned the volume up and was enjoying my drive home when i saw her, what was this lady doing outside? i pulled over, she didnt look like a serial killer so i asked her if she need it any help, she said she was going to the hospital but there were no buses or cabs passing, i offer her a lift cause i wasnt to leave an old lady walking in the middle of the night to the hospital, i ask her for her name she said it was clara and told me about her day and that she started to feel a little bad and thats why she was going to the hospital, we make some small talk she remind me of my granny, when we got there the national guard stopped us, i lower my window and asked what was going on, they just took a look at clara next to me and suddenly i had 5 M-16 pointing at my car and at my face. What tha hell is going on?.
"look at her eyes, look at her!" "should we shoot her Captain?" "captain?" ..what the hell is going on i yelled but no one answer the captain a young guy probably my age told a younger soldier that looked like he just saw the devil to get clara inside, they took me and started asking me questions ..i can only remember clara crying and asking for my help while they took her i was inside the hospital everything was a chaos i dont remember how i got inside there, "i demand answers" i said feeling a bit like tom cruise in a few good men, and thats when he came in.
My name is Leutenant Comander Frank Gomez, you are being held here cause you where found in the company of an infected person, and you will be held here until we can determine withouth a doubt that you are not infected, have i make myself clear to you?. Infected? ...infected..this was crazy what was he talking about? i tried to pulled myself togheter enough to ask him, Excuseme comander, what do you mean with infected? but no answer.
Next thing i know im in a room with people in white space suits doing all sorts of tests on me....yes the test you just thought too, it was horrible but not as horrible as what happends next, that was the first time i saw one, i thought i was dreaming, a human being with the eyes black as night, so pale, and so scary, the mouth area cover in dark red fluid that looked like blood and the hands where like claws with a sharp look, the nose was different like if it had a mind of its own like if it could sense me from the distance, then it looked at me, it was in chains but i was so scared, i would never forget that day

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