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Opening the door, we walked into a living room. already furnished with some of our old stuff, but a lot of it was new. The walls were a plum color. I would have thought it was ugly had I seen it anywhere but here. Across the room was a really nice stone fireplace, accompanied by a large flat screen television. The furniture was a nice kind of retro modern style (if that makes any sense). My dad lead us up the stairs.
"Kyle go with your mother; Jasmine come with me." he said pausing at a door. He opened it slowly revealing a large room. It had a light purple,my favorite, color on the walls, a large bed with lots of pillows and a thick blanket that made me tired looking at it, a desk with laptop and organizing files and drawers, a bay window with cushion, book shelf, large dry erase board, flat screen T.V, and two doors on either side of the room."No Way!" I screamed and covered my mouth. My dad just smiled. I ran in and looked around some more. The carpet was super-soft,I wanted to take my shoes off. I opened all the drawers, even though i knew they were empty, and turned back to my dad. "How did you guys get a house like this?" I questioned.
"I got a promotion, and we sold that old necklace of my grandmothers. Turns out it was worth a lot." he revealed. I ran and gave him a hug and managed to mutter thanks before I ran to the car to get my stuff.
I spent the rest of the night organizing and putting away my stuff. If everything continued in the direction it was heading now, the only thing that this place would be missing would be my best friend. After I finished unpacking I logged on to my V-Chat account and Lexie sent me a request. I opened the chat. "Jaz! Oh my gosh! I miss you already, and look at that room!" shrieked Lexie.
I giggled "I know!" I'm looking forward to seeing the school! you should see how rich this neighborhood is!"
Lexie got serious "Just don't forget about me okay?"
"Of course not! What makes you think that?"
"Nothing really." Lexie was talking fast. "Well I have to go. My mom is calling me from the other room, bye, much love"
"Much love, Lexie" I said and closed my laptop. I looked around my room and sighed. I would have started crying again except my dad walked in.
"Get some sleep okay, your registering for school tomorrow.You'll be picking out your classes and everything. Then you start school on Monday."
I yawned. I was kind of tired.
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